ok some of your might be wondering "why the heck is this guy talking about a meteor, when that girl was about to get raped in the last page???"
my answer, thats how i roll. kidding theres a reason, the way i organised this comic is so it skips from past to present, realise how in the first page it says "6 years ago" so what is happening to the girls isnt in the present. you'll be able to understand easlier as you read further pages.
this is like an experiment on how to devide this story, i plan on it all coming together at the end of the volume. tho i know the way makes it more confusing to read. i can still toy around with this. if people think its a bad idea, i can change it up in the final version.
ull understand better what i mean in the next pages
Hmm...Seems interesting so far. You did forget to post a link to the next/previous comics in comic #5, that could cause some confusion. Keep up the good work!
ah, the clean up is alright. i think you just need to work on the drawing of the girl, she looks quite buffed up. maybe u can draw her to be more delicate? XD
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